Sunday, 26 May 2013

persuasive writing



   Fair-trade rugby balls

Imagine running down the rugby field on a Saturday morning using your new Rebel Sports rugby ball, then you see another ball that lands right in front of you it’s a Fair-trade ball. “You think no I don’t like this ball.’’ Well in my opinion that Fair-trade ball wasn’t made by slaves. Now you’re trying to kick your team to victory but are you really kicking them to victory if that ball was made by child labor? Well you figure that out yourself. Would you choose Fair-trade or Rebel Sports which is better?

My first statement I will point out is the amazing features of this Fair-trade rugby ball. Founded in 2008 a Fair-trade ball has a great size for all ages from 3- adult so everyone gets involved, four linings of polyester which provides better grip, but a Rebel sports ball is not as good because they pop and if your wondering about some brands of Fair-trade rugby balls there is Fair-trade, SKM, Eden and how many types there are 60 which range between size 1,3,4 and 5.And if you thought the Fair-trade rugby ball producers work in a dirty old factory where there is a high chance of getting sick or injured well your wrong .The Fair-trade rugby ball producers work in clean healthy conditions. Where do you think that Rebel Sports ball was made ha? Yeah in a dirty old factory where if those rugby balls were not finished to a high standard the children would get beaten and that is unacceptable and we need to do something to stop it don’t we because we don’t get beaten if we get things wrong and they shouldn’t have to either.                              
Secondly I’m writing about people backing Fair-trade.
The first is with the 2015 rugby world cup they are making it 100% fair by using Fair-trade rugby balls and who knows maybe they will sell other Fair-trade products as well and that should make us feel amazing. Another person backing the Fair-trade idea is former Welsh Fullback JPR Williams. In Cardiff he is promoting the use of Fair-trade balls .Wow I love people backing the Fair-trade idea. So why don’t you get involved                   It’s worth it because imagine if you were one of those children making Rebel Sports balls getting beaten. How would you feel if you were them?

The third reason is about where Fair-trade rugby balls come from? Well most come from China followed by India, Pakistan and Indonesia. These producers get 50-80% of their money they earn the cheapest is 6 pounds that’s $10.79 NZD and the dearest is 16 pounds which is $28.78 NZD That’s a reasonable price compared to a Rebel Sports ball that the children will most likely get about 12% of the money and I hate that.

My fourth reason is the condition that the Rebel sports balls are made in children work 4 -12 hours a day, What is the longest you have ever worked chances are they work longer than you and in much worse conditions than you and if you think that everyone has safety equipment well your wrong. They have nothing

In conclusion you should think of this when you buy a fair-trade ball you’re taking a giant step like running onto the field of the 2015 rugby world cup final you feel so proud knowing its 100% fair. So don’t be afraid go online to Fair-trade rugby industry.com and get yourself a Fair-trade rugby ballot help people in 3rd world countries. Go online and buy a Fair-trade rugby ball because we should care about the world and I think they should all be educated like you and I. Then this world would definitely be fair-trade .So buy Fair-trade for a safe world because this is our chance to help the world go Fair-trade rugby balls, for a better world, a better price, I would, you should So again I will ask you, Would you choose Fair-trade the company trying to stop child labor or child labor the company that beats innocent children? If you would like to find out more about Fair-trade go online or to a shop
              Stop buying from slaves
Go for Fair-trade and if you keep buying slave made products you just keep supporting these MONSTERS CHILD LABOR!

By Cameron Dixon  

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